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Khyndred Spirit
Contributed by
Evening_Star
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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See the horse run
Running as if he had wings on his feet
Running faster and faster
Never losing ground
Never striving to keep up
Never afraid to lose
Only running for the pure joy
And pleasure it brings hims
Always racing his shadow
On and on he runs even after
His shadow is gone
Running never failing to
Stop to take a breath and
Yet still he runs
His never ceasing to
STOP
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Evening_Star
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2005-09-28 17:31:41]
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Re: Khyndred Spirit
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:00:13 PM AEST
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| No bad for a school project. That is kind of how i got into writing too. |
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Re: Khyndred Spirit
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:08:32 PM AEST
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Hmmm, you have a few bad spellings in this, you should maybe try to use a spell checker before you post to make your work look more professional.
I this the start is better than the end.
Good write though,
Phil |
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Re: Khyndred Spirit
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by Redhotchilichic on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:42:01 PM AEST
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| This was pretty good. I recently submitted a poem about my horse too! |
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