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buried alive
Contributed by
seci
on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:53:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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my secrets remain with me so therfeore whatever that was hurting me so bad, you will never know, but only the time will show you brought me hell through my entire life YOU'RE GLAD UH but its all said and done you tried to make it seem as if i was the one in the house driving everyone in sane hell no you were the one why auntie move out, was homeless for 2 months she hated you at that time but now the bells have ringed and victory is mine i loved you i loved you so much inside but i did'n't get love back i was always put down told i wasn't good enough you made me lose my damn pride you want to take what you did not help me earn i hope your body feeds off nothing, because i want help its a way we all have to learn you broke my relationship up with my husband to be you told my sister lies that weren't true LOOK IN THE MIRROR ***** AND TELL ME WHO ARE YOU i have to be strong i know at times i have done wrong you told me that i was nothing and i want be nothing am i something? am i anything? i love you, don't get me to lying here i want you just like i did to hurt and to live in fear i've been feeling this way since the age of five don't ask what is wrong now you know i guess only the lord knows it will be buried with you and i alive
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Re: buried alive
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:24:31 PM AEST (User
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Wow! You have expressed a lot of anger and grief. I have to do these kinds of writes almost weekly to get through things. |
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Re: buried alive
(User Rating: 1 ) by Evening_Star on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:11:58 PM AEST (User
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Wow, such anger and pent up frustrations. I know at times I have felt the way you that you have felt. I think writing is a great escape and good for the soul.
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Re: buried alive
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:41:04 PM AEST (User
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wow this is powerful 2 say the least i felt the unsettling emotions in my heart, simply put a poetic version of an 6.8 on the ricta scale and
a perfect 10 on the scale of life and death, an
excellent write . . .
Ben |
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