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Fallen Rock Star
Contributed by
spazz911
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 09:59:19 PM in AEST
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she a rock star fallen from heaven
waiting for someone to place her again
watches hopefully when someone takes her hand
hoping for the best of it to take over again
looking for a window to let herself out
beating down glass trying to return
but without paitience she has no hope
no hope to get out and return
holding onto what comes next
afraid to loose it in the tide of life
feeling the lose of one person inside
and the birth of another in strife
can no longer recall the angel inside
it is far to tangled within the holesome ravine
for that is where it was pushed off the road and fell
lost in a thicket of drenched blood and debris
caught in a hurricane, pounding wind and rain
torn up from the inside, never to be whole again
wandering at the drop off, wheres that angel now?
but stay on that course, it will bring a new chance to fly
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Re: Fallen Rock Star
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by Sheaa on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 10:09:52 PM AEST
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i really liked that..a little vulgur at the end..but i really really liked it. Love your title..love the poem. keep writing. seriously.
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