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Friendship
Contributed by
strider
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Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 05:30:31 AM in AEST
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Friendship
Ill be your friend
Will love you to the end
When it is time to make amend
Your soul Ill help mend
On me you should depend
For your heart will I tend
Like the lilies in blossom blend
With natures garden all comprehend
Though love be a trend
Ill be your friend that I intend
If the gods more years they lend
Our love we can only extend
Even if you may be bodily dent
And you are a carcase of beauty spent
My love will not be bent
It will stay till its full extent
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strider
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2005-09-29 05:30:31]
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Re: Friendship
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 07:18:20 AM AEST
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A beautifully written dedication for a true friend. May ur friendship last forever. A heart warming write. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: Friendship
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by Archie on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:39:04 PM AEST
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| I think this is a great dedication poem to your friend. I think you are a good friend for writing this to her. |
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Re: Friendship
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:49:01 AM AEST
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Wow!!!! What an awesome write. It's verry powerfull!!!
Even if you may be bodily dent
And you are a carcase of beauty spent
My love will not be bent
It will stay till its full extent
This is my favorite part. Course all of it is great. Not one word wasted from start 2 finish.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Friendship
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:49:54 AM AEST
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Wow!!!! What an awesome write. It's verry powerfull!!!
Even if you may be bodily dent
And you are a carcase of beauty spent
My love will not be bent
It will stay till its full extent
This is my favorite part. Course all of it is great. Not one word wasted from start 2 finish.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Friendship
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:50:59 AM AEST
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Wow!!!! What an awesome write. It's verry powerfull!!!
Even if you may be bodily dent
And you are a carcase of beauty spent
My love will not be bent
It will stay till its full extent
This is my favorite part. Course all of it is great. Not one word wasted from start 2 finish.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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