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After Thought ( I speak to you)
Contributed by
Archie
on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:21:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I have thought hard about our dealings
I have considered the motives of my heart
In it I have found this answer
What better companion should I ever want
than one to help teach me these things
Give courage to face dangers
that I would not face alone
Give me a heart that's loyal honest and true
Show me the way to say the things
we do not want to hear
that may be hard for other men to do
Teach to me long suffering
to put up with my brothers
and the many mistakes they will make
Teach me to still trust in them
though they hurt and use me
help me give forgiveness for their sake
Grant to me empathy
to know how others feel
that they may borrow without usury
I hope that when I am in need
that they will not forget me
and help me when bound to be set free
From the depths of wisdom
give me understanding
to always do and teach what is right
Help me not forget my place
when facing adverse opponents
that they are not my enemies to fight
Instill within me reason
to speak unto my brothers
and that they may do the same to me
To live in expectation
reciprocating mercy
at every apt oppotunity
And so I leave you with these things that I have learned
that you said are not greatly needed
Only time will show when life's brought to affect
and through hard times I'll let these guide me.
Copyright ©
Archie
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 07:07:12 PM AEST
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wise words
and touching at that
i enjoyed it
a lot of your poems have many thoughts behind them
and i love to think
great poem
-->Rae |
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:19:57 PM AEST
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| A very good poem. Life learning as well. SLipSiX. |
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:00:58 PM AEST
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What a very heartfelt and romantic plea-
surreal in it's beauty..
5 from me
B |
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:38:26 AM AEST
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Yes Archie:
Another beautiful write here my friend.
We must repair our self images, vanity, renew our idenities, have a great make-over.
There is a lot of loss of love and security, and there is much need for someone to care for each of us.
We need not to be discouraged, there are prosperous times of pleasure ahead for the young and the old. Full of wisdom in this right.
Thank you,
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by Bruce on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:52:26 AM AEST
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| words could never do justice for what you have written here. just fantastic. |
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by remote on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:36:58 AM AEST
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Now this makes a lot of sense. Good write.
-J |
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:11:42 AM AEST
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Archie,
You have inspired me , brilliant words of wisdom !!!!!
Hugs Leia36 |
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:40:55 PM AEST
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You share with us ur great words of wisdom my dear friend. A heartfelt write. Well done Archie.
Hugs,
Sue, ED. |
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 05:13:27 PM AEST
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You are truly a wise man Archie. Excellent write
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: After Thought ( I speak to you)
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 01:07:43 PM AEST
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Words from a very wise man. I hope I can learn from your inspirational write.
Superb in content and wisdom
Love Angelxxx |
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