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Every Time
Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
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Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 11:06:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Every time I look at your face,
Its always facing someone else,
Youre giving them the love,
That Ill never get to experience.
Every time I smell your scent,
Its always in the distance,
Even when Im close to you,
Youll always seem far away.
Every time youre seen in my mind,
Theres always a halo around you,
I know that Ill always love you,
But youll never love me back.
Every time I write about you,
It always ends in despair,
And as my hand smears the ink,
My tears smear the words even more.
Every time you think of me,
Ill always be a friend,
You never knew what I wanted,
But thats okay to me.
Every time I smell the flowers,
You appear on my mind,
I know Ill always love you,
But youll never love me back.
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Re: Every Time
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by brew on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 11:17:54 PM AEST
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Tel them..............................and dont GIVE up...............Will a good write and from the heart.
Brew~ |
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Re: Every Time
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by karmen on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:13:07 AM AEST
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| i like it a lot.. i kinda know how u feel about it though.. i've gone through a situation like this and it hurts sooo much.. tell the personnn!! weither the response is good or bad.. at least he'll know. and you'll prolly feel better.. but anyways good write |
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Re: Every Time
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by Archie on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:12:06 AM AEST
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| This is a good write. Your words are simple and easy to relate to. I hope you are showing this to the person it is written about. |
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Re: Every Time
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by judasman on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:26:14 AM AEST
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| you should go for it, tell that person. up to them then. good read |
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Re: Every Time
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by inoc on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:48:13 PM AEST
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Your love for her is so strong....you never know...the reason for her shyness maybe is because she really- deep down ...feels the same about you but can't show it...and she just MIGHT love you back
...yes I agree ....show her this poem...
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