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A Speechless Friend
Contributed by
Beckett0306
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:56:50 AM in AEST
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My love for you is so great
The taste of you, is ornate
I long for you, during the week
The curves of your body are so sleek
Youre there when Im happy
When youre around, Im so carefree
Youre there when Im sad
You pick me up when Im feeling bad
Youre skin always so cold
The sight of you is never old
Youre good to all my friends
And they like you too
Youre so much to me
A friend, A companion, and lover
Stay loyal like a true G
To everything youre the answer
Well be together forever
Me and you never fight
My life you are the center
My sweet sweet baby, Miller Lite
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Beckett0306
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2005-09-30 01:56:50]
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Re: A Speechless Friend
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by justkevi on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 03:02:58 AM AEST
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| Nice twist at the end, but none of the lines related to each other well. It rhymed, but there was no sense of flow from one line to another. |
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