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Help me sell my soul to God
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:40:10 PM in AEST
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I've got no skin to hide my self
all my soul is all to see
I've got no voice to call for help
if i had would ya come to me?
I've got no wish to be the son
cause all i am is what i'll be
I've got no choice like everyone
if i cried would you comfort me?
Help me sell my soul to God
just a penny for his thoughts
stars in the sky , I connect the dots
I've got no love to love myself
cause what's the paint without the pain
I've got no wish to send for help
cause i kiss the sun to wear the stain
I've got no wings to push the wind
but that's just me and all the rest
I've got no heart to reach a friend
i'm bored of life, i failed the test
Help me sell my soul to God
A penny for you thoughts i thought
i wonder if God can even talk...
To you, to me, to the ones who die so needlessly....
dw
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Re: Help me sell my soul to God
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:07:40 PM AEST
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A very profound and emotive write you have here Dwayne...Some great metaphors, and heavy duty feelings expressed...That ending is hauntingly true. This is definitely a favourite of mine, from you. Great job, and hang in there: )
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Re: Help me sell my soul to God
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by inoc on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:26:55 PM AEST
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Each line you wrote shows your deepest emotions...
tomorrow is another day and everything should be brighter!
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Re: Help me sell my soul to God
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:17:41 AM AEST
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All God wants from any of us is to just believe.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy
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Re: Help me sell my soul to God
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:51:29 AM AEST
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This is a brilliant write. I could really feel your emotion. Sure wish I had the answers myself. Take care and thank you for sharing.
Tim
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