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My Archangel
Contributed by
Channing
on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 06:08:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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In love and chance
I have found you
Of course at a distance
You are a beautiful view
Your hair is dark satin
Every one of your moves is crucial
As if the world will fall to ruin
Leaving everyone tearful
Im not sure my optimism
Will stand to your criticism
For you play the whole game
To leave everyone in shame
I stand completely inept
Ready to give you my heart
Will you gladly accept?
Or simply tear it apart?
Will there be rejection
Followed with a horrid complexion?
Or will you take me in your wings
To satisfy all my yearnings?
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2005-09-30 18:08:00]
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Re: My Archangel
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by Archie on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:20:34 PM AEST
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| Good write. I think a little courage is in order here. Just go talk to him. I know how you feel though and it is easier to say than to do. |
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Re: My Archangel
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 10:16:26 AM AEST
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wow this a BEAUTIFUL poem! WOW WOW WOW! like i said before tho. . .you should just ask her out. u never kno what might happen.
ttyl
luv Kortnie |
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