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Midnight
Contributed by
reecy
on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 06:37:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The moon shines, burning through the trees
And hovers over the silky blanket of darker crimson
That the night has woven
To suddenly, wake would be quite startling
As silence takes over,
And shows the power it has,
A power to frighten, to surprise
However, Midnight is no time to fear,
As suddenly, you find youve sunk,
Sunk into the depth of the night,
Eyes have no use at midnight, nor mouth, ears or nose
As midnight is only were the dreamer goes.
Copyright ©
reecy
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2005-10-01 06:37:44]
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Re: Midnight
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 07:01:10 AM AEST
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| Really great write. Liked the depth of description and some word choices. Nice one. Chris |
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Re: Midnight
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by Smartie on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 09:26:52 AM AEST
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wow! That was so deep and it, well it just got to me. Thanks For that.
Smartie |
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Re: Midnight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 01:04:13 PM AEST
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love it. especially the last line...
- bethani - |
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