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Bitter Ashes
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:39:06 AM in AEST
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Walking aimlessly to the destination
Full of secrets but holding my head high
I could pretend it all just fades
But then it comes; the reason to cry
Would I ever reach the end ?
Dieing in the world I pretend
That I have none; not one friend
But pretending this is heartless to me
Save the water in a golden cup
From mine eyes the tears serve well
But didnt it hurt when you saw
The bitter ashes of me in hell
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Re: Bitter Ashes
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:57:18 AM AEST
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Very dark and full of questions too! I'm especially taken by the last stanza... the last two lines, i mean, Wow! They're great!
Keep up the great writing!
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Re: Bitter Ashes
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by candysears on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 09:09:20 PM AEST
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Your work is very good,but full of angry and pain..
God Bless! |
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