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I love you!
Contributed by
goddessofangels
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:42:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My heart beats so fast
I just cant last
The way you make me feel
I wonder if it is real
The look in your eyes when you say I love you
I can automatically tell youll never make me blue.
Mistakes I have made I will always regret
But I want you to never forget
Ill love you for always and forever
I want to always be together.
So if you get lost
Know Im always here
No matter how much it costs
I love you my dear
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2005-10-02 02:42:08]
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Re: I love you!
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by kerrah681 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:49:13 AM AEST
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| Oh really, how cute, I'm reminded of a Hallmark card when reading this, which isn't a bad thing, I think it would actually be great for a Hallmark. I think where you used the phrase "make me blue" is where it turned into the Hallmark, But none the less, very cute write, rhyming isnt always best but sometimes it works. |
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Re: I love you!
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:17:33 AM AEST
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this was very good, simple but touching, i hope you are always with your love
your friend
tasha |
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Re: I love you!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:43:59 PM AEST
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| This is very good...I like it alot...as you said to me...you must be in love... :) lol...Shari |
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