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Captive Audience Prophet
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I watch the seasons
change and old pain slowly fades
I'm a stranger In danger
of overloading
as lost souls tell me what they are all about.
When did I become the prohet
the one who knows everything
firewalls are blocking
so I have trouble remembering
why I am trembling
In fear and doubt.
The people gather and someone's laughing
as I slip and fall down
no one's is listening
no one cares
they warm themselfs on the embers
of my emotions as they burn...
I'm a captive of anothers rant
pretending that I am Interested
visibly I shiver and shake
yet still they flow on,
ohhhhh
I'm afraid there's been a fatal error
this transmission is terminated
I see thier lips moving
but I hear no more words.
I ain't no angel and I have no halo
still they come at me
looking at me to preach
about some non exsistence prophecy,
In confusion
they reason
I should make thier choice
as they are not really conversating
they are only talking to hear thier own voice.
stop talking to me
I don't care what they say
don't wanna know what they're thinking,
there is no prophecy
I'm in hell myself
lookin for a reason for being.
.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-10-02 12:58:00]
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Re: Captive Audience Prophet
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:28:48 PM AEST
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Real depth of emotion to your words in this write. Great job, and I like the comparisions. Another awesome poem from you---keep it up!
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Re: Captive Audience Prophet
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:38:34 PM AEST
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Way deeper than deep.
An awesome write!
huggs,
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Re: Captive Audience Prophet
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by anangel_1593 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:27:14 PM AEST
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This is my first time reading a poem of yours, but i can guarantee it won't be the last! Congratulations on a top-notch write!
Ciao,
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Re: Captive Audience Prophet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:55:38 PM AEST
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| A very interesting poem, good write. |
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Re: Captive Audience Prophet
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 08:37:13 PM AEST
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| From an emotional standpoint this is a good write. I can relate to this on a personal level. (but for other reasons I think it is good for me to look at helping others) |
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