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love sucks
Contributed by
cutestmofo
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:38:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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OPEN THE DOOR
Open up the door and let my love shine through
Dont close the door please let me love you
Youve broken my heart not once but twice
Who was the fool who said love was nice
Its a whole lot of heartbreak and much more pain
And it aint even worth the gain
Love sticks u like a blunt sword striking your heart
It hurts it hurts and u suddenly dont feel anymore
I love you so why do you torment me so
My judgment is gone and my heart has gone blur
Love sucks but Im still caught up in it
Shes playing my heart as she sees fit
She can stab me she can cheat and Ill still come running back
Lets just say loves on the attack
And Im a victim well Im tired of running back to you
Youre not my angel or my honey and our love isnt true
Im not loves soldier anymore
And I finally found the cure
To a broken heart and it didnt take me long
Its to forget about you and just move on
By Kerwin Etienne
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cutestmofo
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Re: love sucks
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:43:21 PM AEST
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Hey cutestmofo,
Very powerfull determind write.
U go now.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: love sucks
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:44:12 PM AEST
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such a sweet but sad poem keep it up
luv
jenni
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Re: love sucks
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:49:12 PM AEST
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Good for you, and yes, it does suck!!!! Good expression. Hang in there, and keep up the writes.
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Re: love sucks
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by anangel_1593 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:23:13 PM AEST
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I feel like i'm actually there, watching you tell her to get a life! Nice job. keep up the great work,
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Re: love sucks
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by lostrelic on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:36:06 PM AEST
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i like the flow of this poem cool way to write it meaning isnt hard to see
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Re: love sucks
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:45:19 AM AEST
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| good write |
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