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escaping my fate from a thief in the night
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:38:56 PM in AEST
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a brief view in my life a road i been running from
a future ive seen in my soul since my mind begun
i will try to be short since time i have is brief
since our world could be gone like a thief
it started from young a glimpse of my fate
taken the junkies way out i used drugs to escape
i lived on the street more then once life almost lost
searching to die man at any cost
then one night on a four year drinking span
i jumped of a bridge doing the famous peter pan
to my great surprise i woke up in bed
my body was destroyed but atleast i wasnt dead
the angel that night and all the times before
has been sheltering my life as i slept on the floor
see this has been my life from one near miss to the next
you could never understand from reading this text
ive got a job to do that i can finally face
to try to wake up this human race
one day you will hear me that i know to
hoping you are one of the true
we know life isnt just a evolution game
there is more to life then most could name
so i finally woke up remember i am just a man
who was affraid to see the true plan
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Re: escaping my fate from a thief in the night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:36:10 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for commenting on my poem The Lesson Of Life For Tday.
I read your poem and I'm commenting but the site signed me out, hate when it does that. Anyway.
I read your poem and it chilled my heart, it sounds like your fate has been planned out for you, such as your seen your fate and how everything is going to phase out, do you believe in fate?
I believe that fate can be real but everybody has a different fate, can you actually believe that your life is planned out for you? *Rose* |
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Re: escaping my fate from a thief in the night
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by xofireangel27 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:52:41 PM AEST
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this poem has such great imagery, very good work. hope things get better as they go, if u ever need to talk, just send me a PM.
-Kelly- |
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Re: escaping my fate from a thief in the night
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 05:38:30 PM AEST
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Regan this is a very thought provoking write. I , myself, do believe that our fate is already planned for us. A great poem that makes one think? Keeping penning down your emotions dearest Regan. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue, ED |
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