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Temporary Comfort
Contributed by
xPixiexDustx
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:39:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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You have
no idea
what its like
to go through
each day
like its all ok
put on a smile
and push down
the pain
when really,
all you wanna do is
die
But all you can do is
cry
to tired to try
emotionally drained
emptiness consumes
they all just assume
that I'm ok in my room
but its becoming
too much
can't take anymore
all these feelings inside
build up like never before
try to ignore it
I just wanna quit
pushed over the edge
gonna blow
cant hide it anymore
Its beginning to show
I'm gonna explode
with the pressure building
everythings blurry
my mind is in
overdrive
no place to run
and hide
there's only one way
one way to make it
stop
but why can't I do it
it should be so simple
I've planned it all
down to every last detail
how, when, where, and why
I know exactly what I'd do
but I can't go through
so instead
I'll just take the blade
and slice away
all the pain
again and again
till it hurts no more
in a bloody mess
I lie on the floor
behind locked doors
numbness sets in
I feel okay
but I know it'll only last
just for today.
Copyright ©
xPixiexDustx
... [
2005-10-02 17:39:23]
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Re: Temporary Comfort
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by poisonpen00ad on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:46:02 PM AEST
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Wow, very powerful and beautifuly written.
Full of emotion and feeling too. This is a truely great write. Great work.
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Re: Temporary Comfort
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:10:36 PM AEST
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very powerful, i know how u feel. i hope things will start to look up for u
megan
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Re: Temporary Comfort
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by sweetestsin101 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:15:33 PM AEST
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i kno wut ur feelin. im here for ya if ya wanna talk. aol sn is swtstsn9
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Re: Temporary Comfort
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by myfinalbreath on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:38:10 AM AEST
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| this hits really close to home for me. you really portrayed your emotions very well through your words. great write. |
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