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Insane With Pain
Contributed by
fredsmith
on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 06:59:37 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Insane With Pain
Lying to me,
Hiding the fear.
The future I see,
My path is clear.
All I had felt,
The undying pain.
Life started to melt,
Im going insane.
I became so sad,
Wanting to die.
Everyone was mad,
I could not lie.
I had met someone,
She made me smile.
It was so fun,
Until denial.
Not knowing what to say,
It gave me a fright.
Ending my day,
She was never insight.
I started to cry,
Where did she go.
It was all a lie,
And I didnt know.
By Fred Smith
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fredsmith
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2005-10-02 18:59:37]
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Re: Insane With Pain
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:58:50 PM AEST
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| Beatifully written! I loved the flow, the rhymes. It was perfect. Great job. |
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Re: Insane With Pain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 04:30:48 PM AEST
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love it love it love it...love the rhyming...absolutely amazing
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