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Society
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:35:06 PM in AEST
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They take a human, twist it to form
another one, another one of their own
superficial, fake and stoned
they have no real feelings of their own
Another day, another victim
months and years pass with situation still grim
I wish it were just another vindictive dream
that comes back again and again as it seems
A cycle that will follow through
the victims don't know, they have not one clue
I guess in some ways we all are fools
for we can't even see through the bluest of truths
When will they learn?
You mean it takes for them to burn?
By the is too late for furthur concerns
and I assume everyone is just so different.
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Re: Society
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by OzChick on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:08:17 AM AEST
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I think you have a typo in the second last line.
Asides from that, a good observational poem.
Everyone is so very different and yet we all want the same things, to be loved and accepted for who we are. When will we learn? |
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Re: Society
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by Maxximus on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 04:05:29 PM AEST
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| It's quite easy to get caught up in the mass brainwashing and social conditioning that society brings upon us. And you're right, know it or not we are effected in some way. Good thought provoking stuff. |
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