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when i think of him
Contributed by
sweetestsin101
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Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:52:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when i think of his hand in mine
i lose all thought
when i think of his lips on mine
i can even speak
when i think of him
i swear i feel a swarm of butterflys in my stomach
when i think of me in his arms
i shudder
when i feel the very esence of him...
it is unexplainable.
i cant even put it in words.
zack, you dont know wut an impact you have had on my life
you saved me from what was ultamatly my death.
and i thank you, and love you for that.
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Re: when i think of him
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by goddessofangels on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:01:34 AM AEST
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| awwww!!! Zack must be a pretty special guy!! |
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Re: when i think of him
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by justkevi on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:05:55 AM AEST
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I like the structure towards the beginning, but at the end, it completely shifts and doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem.
I understand and love the sentiment though. |
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Re: when i think of him
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 03:49:27 AM AEST
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| Good write. |
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Re: when i think of him
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by ArmyBrat on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:45:44 PM AEST
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| AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW SWEET!!!!!!!!!!! |
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