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What am I?
Contributed by
Caged Soul
on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:35:18 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Im fake,
dreads on my head, Loxion Kulca on my label.
Im counterfeit,
speaking words of heita & hoelykit,
dont even have a clue.
Anti africanism.
Seeking realism without understanding the essence of me,
eagerly awaiting the birth of me
afro centric brotha cruizin Italian hummer.
Before the initiation of my conception,
I have to surmount mental contraception
who be blocking the course of my seed,
delaying the germination which brings about
the growth of my intellectual weed.
I be smoking, earthin, gloating with unfathomable greed.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2005-10-03 07:35:18]
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Re: What am I?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:27:53 AM AEST
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Ha! I really enjoyed that.
Honest, complete with an edge of 'clean' attitude. Very unconventional in structure...very charismatic.
I especially enjoyed the ending...
A awe-inspiring arrangement of eloquently expressed words with multifaceted significance.
Thanks for sharing :) |
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Re: What am I?
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by remote on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 11:31:50 AM AEST
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| Good one bro. |
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Re: What am I?
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by Whisper on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:57:35 PM AEST
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Wow thats a blast. Confusion maybe. Good write Left me pondering.
Whisper |
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Re: What am I?
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by ArsenicMyst on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:14:23 AM AEST
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this is another wonderful poem of yours ...
like with most of the rest ... you confront social, political and musical issues ...
how they relate on both personal and universal levels
very good writing
Arsenic *.¸¸.·´¨`*
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Re: What am I?
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:41:25 AM AEST
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An honest and very well written piece of poetry u have presented here. I like ur style of writing. You know how to captivate ur reader from beginning to end. Well done.
*hugs*
Sue, E/Dreamer |
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Re: What am I?
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by candysears on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 11:43:29 AM AEST
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Great write....the structure of this was very good...A little touch of humor makes it awsome..I love it!
God Bless! |
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Re: What am I?
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by Caged Soul on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 03:53:21 AM AEST
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AUTHOR'S NOTE:
For those who don't know...
Loxion Kulca: One of the biggest names in South African street wear.
Heita & Hoelykit: two different ways we say "what's up" in SA.
...now you know.
Thanks for reading my poem.
~souLBro~ |
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Re: What am I?
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by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 07:24:29 PM AEST
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I love your writting. I don't always understand your words yet, they speak so loud to me. You write from the depths of your heart and I love that.
ES |
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Re: What am I?
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 02:13:59 AM AEST
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| Hi, my name is Pamela. I really like this poem because it expresses how you really feel. You are very good at writing poetry! |
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