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UNCONDITIONAL Love
Contributed by
Crowe
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Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 11:05:31 PM in AEST
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Understanding this.
Never want to be without.
Can't wait to see you.
Of course, i love you.
Not one more second.
Demanding.
I need to see you now!
Till forever and an eternity.
I belong to you.
Obliterating questions.
Naval to naval.
Attack you with my strongest weapon.
LOVE
Copyright ©
Crowe
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2005-10-03 23:05:31]
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL Love
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by goddessofangels on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 11:11:28 PM AEST
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| AWWWW very creative, great poem!!! |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL Love
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:38:08 AM AEST
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It's called and Acrostic and it is quite a demanding one at that.
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL Love
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 05:57:53 AM AEST
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Well done. It is, in fact an acrostic (As I'm sure you knew), a style I was never good at, though. I guess I'll have to try to write some more in an attempt to improve in that area. Anyhow, well done. Welcome, Crowe, to YPDC. You've made a nice entrance, with a good poem.
Take care.
David |
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 10:57:16 AM AEST
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Okay, acrostic, or whatever, it's pretty damn good.
Great job.
Thank you for sharing.
Tim
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Re: UNCONDITIONAL Love
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:51:10 PM AEST
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Well done, Little Bird. I knew you had it in you. Keep this up and you'll soar.
Love,
Dawn |
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