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Just Like You
Contributed by
Faddy
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:04:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You complain
that noone wants you
and these tears stream down my face
Pathetic sobs
from an only girl
You are blind
to what you have
can't see what could be yours
And I can't decide
if what you don't see
wants to be seen anymore
I cry and I scream
Moronic of me
thinking I was in your eyes
Your hard, dead, stale eyes
unseeing, cruel
blind
Just a number in your phone
using your time
wanting what I can't have
You must think I'm desperate
but you wouldn't know
You can't see
You can't see me
Lower my self esteem
I think I'm nothing
to you, that is
but nothing else really matters
If I stopped calling, would you notice?
Care, at all?
Just the girl waiting three years
hard, dead, stale
Just like you
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Faddy
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Re: Just Like You
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by justkevi on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 01:02:06 AM AEST
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| It hurts when people say things like that. Sometimes people are plain insensitive. It's like complaining to a fat kid about your own weight. |
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Re: Just Like You
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by expired_promises on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 01:02:08 AM AEST
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wow that's really strong....the ending was very good and a nice conclusion, it shows how the people become like the relationship or the relationship like the people....
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Re: Just Like You
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:24:14 AM AEST
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| good write,, |
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Re: Just Like You
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:09:46 AM AEST
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| Wow, I relate to this well as I'm sure many others do, sad to say - there are no words to compensate, as I know all too well you have to cope with it in the best way possible - and writing it out in poetry is the best form of relief - great write, well done ... Jan |
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Re: Just Like You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:38:56 AM AEST
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Awesome write, to which yes, many of us can relate. You expressed you emotions very well and make the reader feel them...which is incredible.
Take care and thanks for sharing.
Tim
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