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Wish Upon A Star
Contributed by
candysears
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:53:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Twinkle, twinkle little star
Let my one love be kind and
True
I wished upon a falling star to make
Me rich and out of dept
Star light star bright the first star
I see tonight
Please make my burden easier to
Carry
Star light, star bright give me just
2 more wishes
Give me patience to guide my feet
In the right direction,
And fill my heart with love so maybe
Ill be able to turn the other cheek.
Twinkle, twinkle little star I know
I ask for more than 3 wishes, But
Please count the 5 as 3 and grant me
5 instead of 3,
Thank you lord for being so forgiving
And granting 5 wishes
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candysears
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2005-10-04 00:53:39]
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Re: Wish Upon A Star
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 02:20:50 AM AEST
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A most dreamy and child like poem oh those
wishes do they ever come true and are they realy worth the price? beautiful poem and very nice easy style u have.
Ben
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Re: Wish Upon A Star
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by ArsenicMyst on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:32:32 AM AEST
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heya Candy ...
this poem is a little different than your ususal ...
its a wonderful dreamy prayer ...
good job ^_^
Arsenic·´`·:·.¸
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