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Disillusion
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:06:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Her face, like stone
Draw a bitter rite in her rigid lips
Her clear eyes, lifeless
Stare the emptiness
Her bent body
Leans on her uncertain walk.
In the silence of the night
The whisper of the wind
Hurts her aching soul
Fading her in a tired tumult.
She follows her footsteps
Wherever they lead her
Like a doomed
In an unconscious grief.
Invades her brain
Flashing memories
Of days of dream, once lived
A longing pain craves her chest
And a tear rolls down her face.
A sunbeam erupts shy
behind the dense fog
hitting her face
Brightening her eyes
It's a new day being born.
By Fernanda F. Rocha
Copyright ©
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-10-04 07:06:34]
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Re: Disillusion
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:46:54 AM AEST
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| I liked it, it seems to lead you on this morbid journey and yet it finds a happy ending. Very emotion filled. Good Write. |
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