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Imaginary
Contributed by
xfaggotx
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Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:05:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
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beyond a river of lies
across the lake of compromise
between a sea of guilt
and a garden of hate
lies the place youve built
where you go to escape
to get away from eveything
and hear the angels sing....
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Re: Imaginary
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:41:57 AM AEST
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| I really like it. It does need something more to help build it up. Once you finish it I think it's going to be an awesome poem. |
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Re: Imaginary
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:42:38 AM AEST
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Excellent start to what will end up being a great write.
Jeff |
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Re: Imaginary
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:40:55 PM AEST
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| i agree.....excellent start....this is gonna be an awsome write...good luck;) |
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