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Reunited
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:17:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Reunited
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He went on many years before her
Leaving her all alone
Lately her sadness and loneliness
Had only seen to grown
For fifty years theyd been together
Walking side by side
Now her desire to go one with him
Has dried up and died
Her days seemed so long
Her mind unoccupied
In a rocking chair, in a darken room
From the world she tired to hide
Memories as company
Tears would fill her eyes
She had the need to be with him
She couldnt say good-bye
Then one bright autumn morning
Her wishes did come true
Her body went to rest
And her soul quickly flew
Reunited with her loved one
She no longer had to wait
When she appeared
He was waiting at the gate
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2005-10-04 09:17:31]
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Re: Reunited
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by xfaggotx on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:22:17 AM AEST
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| i like this, it's very well written. this is probably one of the best i've read on this website. |
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Re: Reunited
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:40:52 AM AEST
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| I like this poem, it used good imagery and such. I liked how it ended happily, even if it wasn't the happiest thing that could have happened. |
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Re: Reunited
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 11:03:23 AM AEST
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very beautful and well put together... it was very heartfelt and a real tear jerker near the end.
I like it a lot.. keep up the fine writing!
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Re: Reunited
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 04:51:48 PM AEST
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Sigh....a tear jerker here..another one I can identify with, only it was my Mom who left first..and Dad followed soon after....
Have I told you before that you are one of my very favourite poets?? If I haven't, I'm telling you now.....
Jenni
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