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drowning in tianna
Contributed by
apollo
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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love in open waters
your eyes as blue
as the chaos i swim in.
beautiful sunsets
allow predator to approach.
a beautiful predator to most.
surrounded; in raging waters.
two predators approach.
what seems beautiful is no longer.
my soul is introduced.
to deceit. lies.
my love
is not what she seems.
for her eyes,
once fixated on mine
are now gone.
and again,
alone; in calm waters.
i drown.
and am forgotten.
Copyright ©
apollo
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2005-10-04 12:02:26]
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Re: drowning in tianna
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:39:49 PM AEST
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very lovely write full of all good emontions pls be nice and comment also i think i made some enemies from my poems
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