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... confused ...
Contributed by
jheng
on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 05:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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you used to joke
about how we met,
how i used to answer
all your questions.
i seldom talk to you,
used to avoid you
coz i thought
you like my friend.
then out of the blue,
you asked for my help,
needed someone to talk to,
someone to confide in.
i listened attentively,
you poured your heart out,
i talked openly,
gave you some home truths.
i eased your pain,
made you smile again,
i helped you get over her,
& get her out of your system.
but somewhere, somehow,
our friendship got too deep,
made me confuse,
made me think twice.
the word love
we never used,
never even entered
our conversations
but this i ask,
with all honesty,
& i truly want to know,
did i fill you heart?
Copyright ©
jheng
... [
2005-10-04 17:02:18]
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Re: ... confused ...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 10:57:28 PM AEST
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very nice poeticaly flowing, humanly honest
technique and artistry covered here, nice readible style also . . .
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