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untitled...suggestions?
Contributed by
undiscoveredshadow
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Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 08:59:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Once upon a midnight blue
My dream of you had finally come true
We walked through the moonlight so clear
Oh how I enjoyed it, for you are my dear
I loved it when you held my hand so tight
Oh what a glorious night
Your breath it smelled like the fresh pine trees
When I am with you I feel so free
It started to rain and her hair got wet
And then our lips suddenly met
As we had stared into each others eyes
We said our good-byes
I wondered if we would ever meet again
But then she said this is the end
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Re: untitled...suggestions?
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by strider on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:50:21 AM AEST
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fantastic, I think you, your mom and dad should get together "once upon a midnight" and "what a glorious night" it will be, please I hope this is not the end of one of so many nights. I need more poems like this, thanks.
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