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The OCD in Me
Contributed by
justme03
on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:48:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Oh, what a creature of habit!
She feels so secure within her insecurities,
for it is there in which her mind makes a habit of staying.
Can she find her way out?
Will she be able to free herself from the
captivity of her own mind?
Will she be able to put aside
the continuous ravings which within
her reside?
Darkness is fading. . .
The light is so near, but she feels she
is falling, right when
it all seems so clear!
Up and down; falling then getting up (a minor triumph);
Lost in a vast ocean of failures, barely afloat on a defeated raft.
Continuous
Obsessions
Un-controlling
Real
Torturous
Never
Ending
. . .
Y?
~Kortnie/Courtney~
Copyright ©
justme03
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2005-10-05 00:48:34]
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Re: The OCD in Me
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by Channing on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:52:14 AM AEST
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| Freakin genius! Loved this write, it perfectly describes the way a person feels with OCD and everything. Truly mad talent showing in this poem! |
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Re: The OCD in Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:52:32 AM AEST
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| Brilliance.......shear utter brilliance.... I cannot think of any other way to describe this poem other than.....Shear Brilliance. You are a beautiful writer & a truly great poet!!!!! |
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Re: The OCD in Me
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 05:58:03 PM AEST
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what a great write as someone who knows someone i will pass this poem to them
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Re: The OCD in Me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:53:27 PM AEST
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Absolutely sensational in every way. I commend you on writing this Kortnie. Outstanding in every detail. You've expressed yourself so openly and clearly. May the sun always shine brightly for you Kortnie.
*heartfelt hugs for you*
sue |
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Re: The OCD in Me
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by Kamal on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 10:11:25 AM AEST
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Well I hope didn't fall to the ground becasue its hard and our tender bodies may crack.....
Then all or beauty gets exposed....
Thats when our heart gets revealed...
I feel you ma!
Peace & love |
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