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these lines
Contributed by
shaggy2468
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Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 04:21:03 PM in AEST
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why? why are these lines here?
not by accident of course you need
help not me but now and fast.
someday they will be scars and
you will regret ever doing this.
to deep and you could die like
many more have in the past.
stop while you can. its hard i know
i went through it as well.
i shed blood i shed tears it dosent have
to be like this. not you, not now,
not ever, not these lines.
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2005-10-05 16:21:03]
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Re: these lines
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 04:29:44 PM AEST
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a very nice poem but may i ask what are the lines???
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Re: these lines
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 09:31:42 PM AEST
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I know what you are talking about I think.
I have lost a lot of friends to drugs. i hope i don't lose future ones. If I am wrong you can explain it to me. |
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