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not knowing
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:02:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crying alone
this pain deep down
suffocating it out
I pretend im ok
theres pieces missing
inside my soul
I look fine
but I'm dying a 1,000 deaths inside
how much longer will this go on?
the anguish i fear
but everywhere i may try to
run its right there
feeding and breathing me in
emptiness takes all of me
JENNI
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Re: not knowing
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:50:48 AM AEST
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That's a really good write, Jennittude. I like it a lot. I could feel that emotion. I guess I'd have to be saying I hope you are doing better but since it's a year old....well, I guess I could say...anyway....I hope you're doing better now.
Enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing,
Tim
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Re: not knowing
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:45:51 AM AEST
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wow Jenni I can relate to this all to well dying
inside, but striving to act like everything is ok.
I hope you don't still feel like this, but I thank
you for being honest and sharing this pain
filled write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: not knowing
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by DieRomantic on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:09:50 PM AEST
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| i like this one a lot.. im surprised it got so little comments (compared to your other poems) its very easy to relate to. love it! |
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Re: not knowing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:23:43 PM AEST
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| Great write. I know this feeling a little to well. I felt the same exact way about the same time you posted this. Should have read it sooner than i would have known that i wasn't alone. Thanks for posting |
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Re: not knowing
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:31:37 PM AEST
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| At least a poem can come out of sadness and anger, eh? I liked it, you could tell it was emotional because it shows in how you wrote it and what you said, and your ending sums it all up nicely. |
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