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again i go Down
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shattered soul
broken bonds
holding me down
eating me whole
I fall to the darkest space
the tears don't stop from falling
nothing inside of me to take just
a dark body full of emptiness
darkness consumes me
as i fight for my life
down i go back to my abysmal place
where all i have is time to waste
JENNI
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Re: again i go Down
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:31:09 AM AEST
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Wow, Jennittude! ! ! ! That must have been a very sad day indeed. You made me feel the emotion with every word. Awesome.
Thanks for sharing and take care,
Tim
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Re: again i go Down
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 11:08:07 PM AEST
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It's the first time I read your work Jenni and I have to admit I like what I've read. Your poem is packed with sad emotions.
darkness consumes me
as i fight for my life
down i go back to my abysmal place
where all i have is time to waste
I can so much relate to these words written. Chin up and may ur days ahead be much brighter.
*hugs*
sue
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Re: again i go Down
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:48:12 PM AEST
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| i liked this poem |
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Re: again i go Down
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 01:39:56 PM AEST
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Amazing how you capturd the emotion of one being depressed and of course we hope your not and you are just writting of it.
A very good post.
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Re: again i go Down
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by MysticFairy on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 09:35:04 AM AEST
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| This is VERY sad. Well written. It reminds me of how I feel sometimes. Thanks for sharing, and thanks for the comment on my song. |
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