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I Wanted To Feel ....
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 04:28:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I wanted to ignore
The restrictions of this world
To ignore the pleasures
Of this empty humanity
I wanted not to be a body
In this raw freedom
Not to listen to the echo
Of these lonely walls
I wanted not to have to see
The gloating faces of victory
The sun darkening
In the obscured secrecy
I wanted to feel lightly
Nothing want
Only to be
By Fernanda F. Rocha
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Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-10-06 04:28:03]
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Re: I Wanted To Feel ....
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 06:25:42 AM AEST
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| I loved this. It captured my mood and tapped into feelings that are never far from the surface. Thank you |
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Re: I Wanted To Feel ....
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 02:47:26 PM AEST
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deep and meaningful write nicely constructed very beautiful
Michelle |
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Re: I Wanted To Feel ....
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:47:06 AM AEST
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| Thank You both :) |
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Re: I Wanted To Feel ....
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:50:55 PM AEST
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This is on the surface a seemingly simple poem of wants, yet it seems to have so much depth behind it.
A well crafted piece!!! |
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Re: I Wanted To Feel ....
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by ArsenicMyst on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 06:56:31 PM AEST
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soulfully and beautifully done ...
i like how it weaved its way to the basic truth
·.¸¸.*arsenic
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