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Crushed
Contributed by
lil_pup91
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Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 06:58:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I loved
Once lived
My heart was full
But now its gone
Gone
My heart is crushed
You cant see it
Its crushed, to a million peices
I loved
Onced loved
My heart was full
But now its gone
Gone
My heart is crushed
It hurts
So much
I cant stand the pain
My heart is crushed
Crushed
Nothing left
But a hole
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lil_pup91
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2005-10-06 06:58:30]
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Re: Crushed
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArsenicMyst on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 07:15:07 PM AEST
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i love your poem
your words and structure convey and express everything you feel
tho your heart is crushed and empty
you have enuf heart to write this
gut wrenching and well written poem ...
including the next one "scared to be alone"
i especially like "Nature's World" ...
with its many hidden meanings
·.¸¸.*Arsenic
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