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All I Need
Contributed by
Savannah
on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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All I need tonight is you Whoever you may be To kiss away the thousand fears That are hidden inside of me
And to stand beside me Wherever beside me is And tell me that the arms I belong in Could only be his
And to kiss away the crystal tears As they pour out of my eyes To wipe them before the freeze on my cheeks And to never ask me why
And to be happy doing that And having that be just enough Just being content taking what comes My smooth, my pain, my rough
So whoever and wherever you are Way out there or somewhere near No matter what, when you need to find me I'll be waiting here
Copyright ©
Savannah
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2003-01-19 11:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: All I Need
(User Rating: 1 ) by rustygrl33 on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 09:36:40 PM AEST (User
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i really really like that! good job |
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Re: All I Need
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:50:09 AM AEST (User
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Great poem ... love this. |
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Re: All I Need
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lone_er on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:56:45 AM AEST (User
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A beautiful view of an honest heart. God speed your request .
Lone_er |
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Re: All I Need
(User Rating: 1 ) by mblondiepink on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:45:25 PM AEST (User
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I love this poem! It describes exactly how I feel. |
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Re: All I Need
(User Rating: 1 ) by alcina on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 07:56:17 PM AEST (User
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Hi Savannah,
Today is the first day that I decided to submit one of my poems to this site. You are the first person whose poem I have read and let me add, normally I would not respond. I am sure I am being biased in my action by now doing so (normally this is not me) and this is due to the fact that I have a 15year old daughter, whose name is Savannah. To the point.... Your poem is full of emotion from the heart and brilliant.
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