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You are me
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Today, I fell in love.
With the girl in the mirror.
Smiling at me.
No longer ravaged by melancholy,
Smitten as a kitten, and just as warm with life.
Ive transcended to greater heights,
To thy embrace...
In my imagination, I can always fly...
The clouds are blushing with pink residues of an eternal sunrise,
I remember my smile used to be as divine,
And tell myself that it is never too late to catch a new love dawning...
Theres a rainbow not too far away,
Past the Spring knolls and dew-laced roses,
Neath castles in the sky...
A myriad of lustrous hues paint my world,
I am no longer 5,000 shades of gray,
But a masterpiece of intricate splendor...
Im dressed in gowns of mirth and joy,
My heart breathing as if for the first time,
Tears of blithe rolling down my cheeks like children on a hillside...
And I ask you, mirror,
Who is this youth? This innocent and radiant seraph?
You are asking me things you already know.
You are endless beauty. You are unbridled happiness. You are dreams soon to be reality.
You are me.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-10-07 17:18:46]
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Re: You are me
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:25:31 PM AEST
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Wow Stephy... I have to say this is a nice change.
I absolutely adore this (*Has a thing about mirrors*)
And you know what? You'd better believe that mirror, because you are beautiful.
Fantastic write, definatly one of my favourites.
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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Re: You are me
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by purplestary on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 06:34:05 PM AEST
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| this write is beauty in truest form. i only wish i could have moment when i look in the mirror and see myself this way. i loved this. thank you for posting it. |
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Re: You are me
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by Kie-Kie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:25:41 PM AEST
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Stephanie,
Oh what a wonderful poem about loving yourself *smiles* I'm glad to see ha happy poem on here :) *huggles*
This was beautifully written, I do hope te see more like this :)
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: You are me
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by crazy on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:40:37 PM AEST
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| i like this poem because i have kinda the same prob. i hate my self but i love my lil things such a majestical poem loved it |
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Re: You are me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 09:50:54 PM AEST
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OMG Stephy, this is beautiful!! I agree with Phil. A lovely
and most refreshing write from you. Of course, I enjoy
reading all of your stuff, (so brilliant and well crafted it is),
but this one is exceptional in it's happiness!
"The clouds are blushing with pink residues of an eternal sunrise"
I love it. L-O-V-E, love it!!!!
*hugs*
~Breezy
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Re: You are me
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 11:11:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful my dear Stephanie it was flawless
in its "simplicity".
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: You are me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 12:37:09 AM AEST
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Great steph, i see it worked out well but then y not u r well seasoned in your craft a gem in
every work u grace these pages with, lovely.
((((((((((stephy)))))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: You are me
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:18:39 AM AEST
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| wow awsome |
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Re: You are me
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:00:56 AM AEST
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This write was so beautiful. Reminded me of the words in the song you are beautiful no matter what they say.
You are truly a beautiful person inside and out hun
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: You are me
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 06:31:05 PM AEST
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OMG!!!
HEEEEEEEEE!!!!! ^____________________^
I AM CHOKING ON MY SMILE! *gag_gakk*
You can not know how happy this makes me.
I is everything I have told you in so few words.
I am so happy you see what I do;
and you portray it so beautifully, too. ^.^
There’s a rainbow not too far away,
Past the Spring knolls and dew-laced roses,
‘Neath castles in the sky...
I thought it said Spring rolls... XD YUMMERS!
But its a great stanza...
everything about this poem is so delicately breathtaking!
No longer ravaged by melancholy,
Smitten as a kitten, and just as warm with life.
I’ve transcended to greater heights,
To thy embrace...
heeeeeeee!!!! I am so happy!!!!
you cute little kitten you....
A myriad of lustrous hues paint my world,
I am no longer 5,000 shades of gray,
But a masterpiece of intricate splendor...
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You ARE!!!
You are my masterpiece.
Stephanie Molina,
You are endless beauty. You are unbridled happiness. You are dreams soon to be reality.
You are me.
I love you, darling.
~*~Melocotón-Mango~*~ |
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