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Lost
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 07:39:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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This empty house is not a home
and this strange room is not mine
I've never felt more alone
to come back to this tragic find
This family is not a family
your empty words are not real
I don't know what it means
to not be able to feel
This betrayal is not love
it cannot be expressed
I know I should rise above
this distorted mess
But I'm just a girl now
trying to find her place
But I don't know how
to put a mask over this face
This house is not a home
and this family is not real
I thought you'd like to know
that this is how I FEEL
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AnastasiaN
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2005-10-08 07:39:25]
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Re: Lost
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by Spike on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:49:33 PM AEST
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Emotional and very direct. You hit upon a couple of really key elements to your distress - the fact that you're still young and trying to find your place in the scheme of things, and that you can't conceal your emotions about this, which are all the more reason that you need stability, trust and familiarity in your life. A painful topic well handled.
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