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Violated
Contributed by
xPixiexDustx
on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 04:59:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She sits lonely At the bar He buys her a drink Then guides her out to his car
He turns down a dark ally Begins to kiss her cheek She tries to resist But she's too frightened to speak
His hands begin to roam She quivers with fear He whispers softly "Don't bother to scream.. There's no one near."
He unbuttons her pants She tries to put up a fight Screaming and yelling But her cries vanish into the night
A blow to the gut Another to the head She fears for her life Fears that she might end up dead
Again and again... She pleads for her life He screams in her ear "SHUT UP OR I'LL GET MY KNIFE"
She's too weak now to even struggle But still she tries He's just too strong Using his hand to muffle her cries
Trying not to provoke him, She lies there lifelessly As he continues forcing himself upon her Violating her privacy
Her body now lies cold on the empty, dark street Bloody and bruised From her head to her feet
The ally, closed off With bright yellow tape Last night was the night She was beaten and raped
Copyright ©
xPixiexDustx
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2005-10-08 16:59:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Violated
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnaBanana on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:03:07 PM AEST (User
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wow this should never have to happen to any girl ever |
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Re: Violated
(User Rating: 1 ) by zalzool on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:59:16 PM AEST (User
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amazing write
amazing work
very sad to write
as commented before that should never happen
peace |
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Re: Violated
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:43:07 AM AEST (User
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so sad... |
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Re: Violated
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ramfire on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:02:13 AM AEST (User
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A bad scene for sure. Nice quatrain with end words of lines two and four rhyming. |
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Re: Violated
(User Rating: 1 ) by judasman on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:32:53 PM AEST (User
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disturbing
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