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So Long and Forever
Contributed by
grey_matters
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Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:24:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Present the peasent with a present,
A princess clothed in rags,
But her clothes burn away as her beauty shines through,
The naked truth,
Is something to behold,
But not to hold,
You cannot touch the fire,
Only feel the heat,
That is you near me,
Only near, never here,
Over there is the greenest grass,
It will last,
Long and forever,
Summer and falling,
Help me,
Something's happening,
Hold me,
But please don't touch me,
Less is more, love is blind,
I don't lie,
Every line ends in rhyme,
Don't know why,
I do,
but you do not,
unless i'm wrong,
and I am,
again...
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Re: So Long and Forever
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 05:39:03 PM AEST
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| Fantastic write. You're word choice was great. Keep writing. |
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Re: So Long and Forever
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 07:18:16 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this...great write, really! Keep it up. TD |
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