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The Consuming ...
Contributed by
sarankrish
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Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:28:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Pain and sorrow
Forever my silent companions
Quietly reminding me
Of the unfinished
I haven't yet done
What I dreamed I would do
The desire burns fiercely
In the depths of my soul
The pain and sorrow
Of all mankind
It seems to consume me
So quietly it consumes me
Yet so completely it ruins my life.
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sarankrish
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2005-10-09 13:28:16]
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Re: The Consuming ...
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 05:37:20 PM AEST
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| "The desire burns fiercely in the depths of my soul" Great line. I loved this poem. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: The Consuming ...
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by ArsenicMyst on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:11:06 PM AEST
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well there is hope afterall ...
i read your other poetry that speak of promise
you do write very well
¸·:·´Arsenic
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