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I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY
Contributed by
LongingFor
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Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:41:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hoPe You''re Happy
I broke down,
Are you happy?
Are you pleased?
Because I know, youre no different
You dont care about my difficulties
I dont need you feeling bad for me
I dont need your shoulder either
But dont lie to me, like I do to my mother
Things inside me are boiling up
They need to be changed
But every day I want to be a better person
For who, not for me
I always thought I was tough, and open-minded
But that was just me describing you
Always trying to help people
When again Im the one needing it too
Getting nightmares about my future
Scared to sleep or walk down the street
I always looked different at life, but now Im scared to dream
Scared to cry, I really am, the tears just get dried up inside
I actually feel at times like Im on the right track
Im where Im supposed to be
But then someone makes it extremely clear that Im still confused
Still dont recognize me and the part thats just the wanna be
The moment I take another step
The feeling I get when I open a new door
Is a smile on my face that you wont see for a while anymore
Its funny how things can change over a long time
Yet it seems so quick
I know not too long ago, I was not worrying about my lies or tricks
Yet again I know I was uptight, since my lies became my past
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Re: I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:53:06 PM AEST
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you sound like a lost puppy,
like your lost in some bizzare
computer game, and honestly
its hard to read. thats just my
opinion, other people dont agree
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Re: I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY
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by shelby on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:59:19 PM AEST
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others always seem to think they know us best when most times they dont have a clue. DOnt try so hard to work through things they have a way of working out themselves. Nicely expressed emotional write
Michelle |
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Re: I HOPE YOU ARE HAPPY
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by poet_of_anger on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 09:36:58 PM AEST
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| This is very very good. Wonderful writing! |
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