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I can see it in your eyes
Contributed by
Patti
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Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 08:22:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can see it in your eyes
All the lies and all the suffering
All the pain youve gained ever since then
But Something I cant see is your dreams
Those which you whish upon to try to make true
Those which make living worth while
Those who you know keep you inspired
I cant see that am I blind?
This is an expression of words that cannot be defined
Because of that look in your eyes which does not lie
My life is just a mere delusion that cannot inspire your soul
And as much as I try that look in your eyes will for ever be cold
And as much as I love you
To me it seems it could never be the love of your dreams
Or the uplifting feeling of your soul
You look at me for the last time
And as we say our last good bye
The last tear came down your eyes
Not mine
Copyright ©
Patti
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2005-10-10 20:22:37]
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Re: I can see it in your eyes
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 08:53:39 PM AEST
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This is good. I like the way you write from the other person's point of view.
I know it is hard to see the dreams of others but I try because maybe he or she will see my dream too. |
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Re: I can see it in your eyes
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 10:05:11 PM AEST
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interesting write very smooth flow to it two thumbs up
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Re: I can see it in your eyes
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 12:14:27 AM AEST
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Very Good Write-
In the end someone will always cry-
Always remember to hold your head high and be strong.
No one can take away the things that one may feel...
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