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YOUR HEART LIKE A WINTER NIGHT
Contributed by
robertdavidson
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 01:44:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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YOUR HEART LIKE A WINTER NIGHT.
By Robert Davidson.
You passed me by
Didnt speak, didnt smile
Going off with an angry head toss
You left me neath the cold moon light
Your heart like a winter night.
I phoned to you
Write letters, no reply
Take back those words unkind, I implore.
You turned from me in bitter spite
Your heart like a winter night.
Ive lost it all
Love gone, so alone
Im torn to shreds, my heart is mocked
Youve left me such a sorry sight
Your heart like a winter night.
Now at deaths door
Shadows fall oer my heart
Take back those words unkind, I beseech
I fake a laugh, I speak in fright
Your heart like a winter night.
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robertdavidson
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2005-10-11 01:44:41]
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Re: YOUR HEART LIKE A WINTER NIGHT
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by MetalheadSD on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 01:52:28 AM AEST
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| I really liked this. Great job. |
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Re: YOUR HEART LIKE A WINTER NIGHT
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 02:44:09 AM AEST
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Sad but written well. I know a few folks with cold, cold, hearts.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: YOUR HEART LIKE A WINTER NIGHT
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:03:05 AM AEST
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YES!!!!!! Great Write
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: YOUR HEART LIKE A WINTER NIGHT
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:54:52 PM AEST
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Robert this is a sad, but very well written piece of poetry you have here. I can feel your sadness and anguish through your words. I hope things are well with you.
Hang tuff and may your heart find the true love that it deserves. Well done on presenting such a great write.
*heartfelt hugs 4 you*
Sue
PS thank u also for your comments on my work. Deeply appreciated as always. |
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Re: YOUR HEART LIKE A WINTER NIGHT
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:08:14 PM AEST
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Well Robert, I must say your write reflects misery and loss..
Winter describes the cold heart for sure..
I get the out of control feeling just reading it.. helps me to understand just why we all need that love, that security from someone to care and love us..
****Now at death’s door
Shadows fall o’er my heart
Take back those words unkind, I beseech
I fake a laugh, I speak in fright
Your heart like a winter night.
Death is the end of the cycle, meaning the relationship has ended..
Your heart, imprisoned by cold winter..
The character will find change and move on.. hopefully after the fake laughs.. the heart will not become cold.. as winters heart..
Warm up, plant new seeds, Spring will rise soon..
Enjoyable poem.. ty..
Raquel Leah :D
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