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That I Might Stand
Contributed by
Loende
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:29:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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It amazes me still,
That I can call you Friend.
That no matter the weather of my soul,
You still hold my hand, my heart.
I wake each day, on legs less than steady,
And when I might fall, collapse,
You stand, hand raised, palm up,
And I am a leaf on the wind.
We fly, you and I, laughing and free.
Sometimes near, sometimes apart,
But fly we do, arms wide, sun kissing our skin,
No destination, just the journey in mind.
So I say to you, my Dear One, you give me wings
You, who know not what you do, or when,
I say to you, in the only language I can,
That because of you, I can soar.
Copyright ©
Loende
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2005-10-11 03:29:32]
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Re: That I Might Stand
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:39:47 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: That I Might Stand
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 04:59:41 AM AEST
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Great write
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: That I Might Stand
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:10:39 AM AEST
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That you might stand, you have angels, and that angels might be angels, they have you.
Better words would be hard to find, my friend.
Take care.
David |
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Re: That I Might Stand
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by chickrockerbaby on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:52:16 AM AEST
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| It seems many people forget about friends and do not appreciate them the way that they should. It's beautiful to read a poem about friendship in which you truly can tell one cares about their friends and just wish to keep them friends until the end of time. |
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Re: That I Might Stand
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:26:51 PM AEST
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A touching piece of work, it most assuredly is.
I especially like the latter two verses of the second stanza. Excellent.
May the sun shine on your road, mo chara.
Andrew |
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Re: That I Might Stand
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 09:47:02 AM AEST
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| friendship is indeed a blessing. well put. |
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