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Provocative
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:23:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A midnight creep
penetrate deep
Smoldering emotions
cause a commotion
Disturb the peace!
unleash the beast
You kiss me urgently
my lips moisten expectantly
Swallow you whole
devour my soul
This outpouring of love (all for you...)
Between the sheets, nothing's taboo
We're in love, it's okay...
satisfied; no need to stray
Our bodies collide
keeping in stride
Passion overflows
this love grows
Can no longer contain
our climax obtained
Let's get a good nights sleep
My heart is yours...to keep
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-10-11 19:23:45]
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Re: Provocative
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:31:09 PM AEST
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*especially likes that ending of yours Scorp*
lol, it might sound weird, but this poem could faintly, at times, be talking about poetry
until of course you get into the sheets, where I think of course the line has to be drawn, lol. But anyways as for the poem itself, great as always, and I personally enjoyed the fourth stanza the best, because being able to keep stride after a collision is no easy feat!
lol great stuff |
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Re: Provocative
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:33:12 PM AEST
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I'm blushing.
This was a good write |
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Re: Provocative
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:51:32 PM AEST
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Eeeeek Cold shower!!!!! Cold shower!!!!! Huh? Wha?....did I really type that? Scorperiffic, awesome as usual! ! ! Uh, yeah.....awesome
:-Q~
TIMebomb
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Re: Provocative
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by xPixiexDustx on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:06:36 PM AEST
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| hehe I like this. Passionate. Hot, steamy poetry makes for good reading. ;) |
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Re: Provocative
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by brew on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:20:15 PM AEST
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Its all to a point, of what means, to you and who you could be taunting.! great write.............its inavaded.....and so opening, yet, scarce..............Wonderful.......
Brew~ |
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Re: Provocative
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:21:30 PM AEST
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nice poem scorp..and about one of my favorite topics!!
wiz |
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Re: Provocative
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:24:27 PM AEST
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A cleverly crafted poem written by a very talented Miss. I absolutely love the way it ends up between the sheets, lol.
The ending is absolutely sensational.
Overall another brilliant write by the gifted Scorp. You rock girl! I'm glad to see a happier post from u.
*hugs*
Sue
PS who must read it over and over again |
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Re: Provocative
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:57:37 AM AEST
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| lmao you naughty girl you.hehehehe |
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Re: Provocative
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 08:14:37 AM AEST
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Very good....original...Hot....Hold the reader interest unto the end...lol...Lordy,lordy..Very good....God Bless
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Re: Provocative
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:15:12 AM AEST
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OMG that's nasty, yet soooo cool. It was written with so much passionate intention and wicked playfullness, I can't but to love it.
Go get rest for round two hun.
Love ya!
Ash
~souLBro~ |
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Re: Provocative
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:40:19 AM AEST
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Wow now wait till my hubby gets in lol.
Hot steamy write loved it
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Provocative
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:01:10 PM AEST
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yes, very stimulating write, I loved it
RL |
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Re: Provocative
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by Darkhorse71 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 02:04:16 PM AEST
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WOW Scorp!!!!!!
Very creative, intense, and provocative - great title!!! Love your style and heat in this one!
hugs
john |
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Re: Provocative
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:09:59 PM AEST
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...uhm.....scorp? Yeah I DEFINITELY RELATE!!!!!
You are scorpio through and through girl!!!! Holy hell.....
yeah...cold shower is definitely a good idea...
Awesome write scorp! Simply amazing.
You GO girl!!!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Provocative
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 12:27:34 PM AEST
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I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was wicked good. I liked the end.. Great job
christina |
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Re: Provocative
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by LostAmbition on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:11:23 PM AEST
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ha! r u taunting that guy
or wat???? :p
hes a fool for turning
away such a fiercely
passionate soul as yer self
yer poems r like following
a love story, but i wish the
ending was a happy 1 for ya
great job with this senseual
poem
i'v missed so much of yer poetry!
woah!! i need to catch up :O |
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Re: Provocative
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 08:35:48 PM AEST
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0_0
oh my. is it wrong that i am turned on right now? i need to find a scorpio woman and how! |
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Re: Provocative
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 27th October 2020 @ 01:41:58 AM AEST
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You definitely got it going on here.
Extremely passionate write for sure.
That aside, great poetry. |
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