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Finally over you
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:35:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You left me more then a year ago Or maybe I left you Either way we're not together It was hard to move on from that Knowing you had someone else It took me a while to get over it I thought I never would at first It hurt just to think about you Everytime I did I couldn't breath I felt like that feeling would never go away I just wanted to die Just give up on everything I still think about you a lot But not as much as I used to Everything has gotten easier I no longer feel like I can't breath when I think about The memory of you doesn't bring pain I've moved on You're just a distant memory Something that used to be I'm over you now I will always have feelings for you of course But now I'm okay with not being with you Now you're gone And I'm fine with it
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Re: Finally over you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:30:04 PM AEST (User
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This poem reminds me of a song;
"It used to be ever time
I'd hear a sad song I would die
It'd remind me of when
you and i were so much in love
I couldn't eat
I couldn't sleep
I'd just sit at home
and i'd weep
but now all that has changed
I've found someone to ease my pain
and it don't hurt now
no not now
baby it don't hurt now no not now"
Good write |
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Re: Finally over you
(User Rating: 1 ) by SkC_cutie on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:25:16 AM AEST (User
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Nice poem |
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Re: Finally over you
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 10:58:12 AM AEST (User
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i can relate to some of it, like i'm sure a lot
of people can..
it's definitely hard to get over
someone special...and this poem showed that
nice work, keep it up. |
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Re: Finally over you
(User Rating: 1 ) by jheng on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:16:00 PM AEST (User
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great poem. trying to pick up the pieces after a break up is really hard. |
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