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end the burn
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:46:41 AM in AEST
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heaven help me end the burn
i'm not love but i love to learn
you could say i missed the train
but i'm not one to hate the blame
take me tripping on the moon
i can never love again
she took away my only friend
lonliness i feel the end
heaven help me end the sting
never would i let it sing
you could say i'm in the grey
but that's not time for you to say
you won't let me hold the sun
i can never love again
she could write me off the scene
i help myself become a dream
Heaven help me sleep till noon
i can't stand the mornings brew
i'm in love with hating you
never can i care for you...
dw
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Re: end the burn
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:13:36 PM AEST
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your words bring forth you pain. The burn will end soon and you will find peace and happiness again
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Re: end the burn
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:02:40 PM AEST
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i really like your style. it's one i could never get to work for me. i congradulate you... this is an inspiring and outstanding piece.
ROCK. i love it.
hUgZ.... ----> jennie* |
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Re: end the burn
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:03:18 PM AEST
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i really like your style. it's one i could never get to work for me. i congratulate you... this is an inspiring and outstanding piece.
ROCK. i love it.
hUgZ.... ----> jennie* |
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Re: end the burn
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by weepingprophet on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 02:25:40 PM AEST
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you have created yet another masterpeice here. This peice seems more simple to me than your other works that i have read. But you pulled its simplicity off wonderfully. This is solid and it matures in its progression. It was a joy to read. consuming. Intelligent. soft but still anguished.
my favorite line and the one that keeps playing over and over in my head is "you won't let me hold the sun, i can never love again." there is an unmistakable beauty there that demands recognition.
~where is the strong armed man, eyes not bleak or stark? here are his hands, guiding wounds to trace my heart~weepingprophet |
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