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Tearing
Contributed by
Elatednbliss
on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Lost again
loved a friend
tears fall free
I'm crying
Now I know
since you've showed
me that you
don't want me
anymore...
Hurts to the core
I'll hate you more
for lieing
never say
you love me.
Copyright ©
Elatednbliss
... [
2005-10-12 13:07:43]
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Re: Tearing
(User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:20:59 PM AEST
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very straightforward and brutally honest.
i'm taken by the title...it really lends itself
to the heart of the poem.
keep up the strong writing! |
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