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Soft Light and I
Contributed by
Dri
on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:18:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Soft light and Ive learned to love
The way your skin runs from your head
To your toes
And the way you dont realize the
Things you say
Take on a dance of their own
In my head
They take on a rhythm
I love this beautiful girl,
Geeky writer who
Wont read me her stories
Who just happens to be naked
In my arms
Do you see how easily this fits into my verse
How easily this transforms my world
You say you wont let me go
And I love the rope you tie around
Me
The platform you place beneath my feet
That levels me out
I want to take you flying
Youve giving me wings and
I just want to watch the mountains
With you
And share your passion.
Copyright ©
Dri
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2005-10-12 13:18:10]
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Re: Soft Light and I
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by enigma on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 04:32:18 PM AEST
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...now, why has no one read this one before? I feel a priviledged eligance for having done so...
...funny...ironic...twisted humor of the gods...I feel like a twenty year old stuck inside the body of a fifty-five year old...I am safe, but those two can really raise havok...this poem had the twenty year old nodding his head...yup...aha...and the old grouch shaking his head with a look that says, grow-up...to which the twenty year old says, Peter Pan didn't have to, I don't have to...on and on and on they go...
...don't know if you've read my "Schitzophrenic's Delight" poem...I've lived way, way too much of my life in a wishy wishy dream world...not any more, though, I'm just beginning to really enjoy reality...
...you sound pretty healthy...I look forward to reading more of your creations...
ron...enigma |
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